a woman...a being...and everything in between
There's no smoke without fire. Beautiful Haiku.
That was simply superb, Meenakshi. Encompassing everything in it's arms.... now turned into dust!:(
The last line was too much Meenakshi Travel India
Fire does destroy without a trace
Your lines made me think-fire destroys all boundaries & identifications .
'Fire licked'very good phrase nice haiku
And the enquiry begins! Lovely!
No use guessing ... what's lost is lots forever :-(
amazing !!! ' fire licked' !!! .. any guesses what it was !! depth of thoughts .....!!!
Awesome. Great suspense. What is the secret?
the barrier of eternal loss.. brilliant haiku.. warns us to be careful before we burn something. Probably, both on the inside and the outside.
Innovative and thoughtful! 'Any guesses what it was' thought provoking lines!
Hmmm fire doesn't care what is in its path, it is unrelenting...
Beautifully Written...Sreedev Soman @ KookyDom
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