Saturday, 6 April 2013

Burnt


Fire licked
All that remains
Charred ash

Charred ash
Smitten by smoke, any guesses
What it was


Picture taken from: Google Search

17 comments:

  1. There's no smoke without fire. Beautiful Haiku.

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  2. That was simply superb, Meenakshi. Encompassing everything in it's arms.... now turned into dust!:(

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  3. Fire does destroy without a trace

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  4. Your lines made me think-fire destroys all boundaries & identifications .

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  5. 'Fire licked'very good phrase nice haiku

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  6. And the enquiry begins! Lovely!

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  7. No use guessing ... what's lost is lots forever :-(

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  8. amazing !!! ' fire licked' !!! .. any guesses what it was !! depth of thoughts .....!!!

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  9. Awesome. Great suspense. What is the secret?

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  10. the barrier of eternal loss.. brilliant haiku.. warns us to be careful before we burn something. Probably, both on the inside and the outside.

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  11. Innovative and thoughtful! 'Any guesses what it was' thought provoking lines!

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  12. Hmmm fire doesn't care what is in its path, it is unrelenting...

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  13. Beautifully Written...

    Sreedev Soman @ KookyDom

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